i was thinking the discussion about poems inspired me so maby we could wright some of our own!!! heres some of mine

MUM

When mum got arthritis it was over a year ago

But to see her walk the pain she’s been thru would never know.

Lying there in her bed, she’s as cold as ice can be

She needs help walking to the loo, and she cannot make her own tea.

Its not funny when she screams in pain at 5oclock in the morning

She’s go the most dreadful cramp, and it comes without a warning.

Again she’s up and about, riding along on her scooter

Going places here and there, and wherever it dose suit her.

Then all of a sudden she’s got it again, the arthritis hits

And her energy it will quit.

So here we are again, were back to square one

The pain-free time it came, and now it seems to have gone

But hey think of that saying this two will pass

Coz for a while she will be out and about again and will be a happy lass

The magic set

Me and my sister are beat friends,

And we have a magic set

And at making ourselves appear and disappear

We rely are the best

We have a magic box and a magic wand that folds

We get the table, box ,and sofa all in a row

We hake sure there’s no holes for people to see then were ready to go

We have made a secret whole In the box where we can get out of it

And what’s cool is its at the back and no one knows about it

I tap the wand on the table 1,2,3

My sister then crawls out of the box

And hides behind the settee

One day my sister said to me

Little sister I do feel that if I give you £5

I can make my self disappear for real

£5!!!!! I said YOU HAVE A DEAL!!!!!!

You have probably guessed my sister is a child

Who is of cores extremely wild.

She grabbed the wand and clenched her fits

HALT!!!! I said IT’S A BIT OF A RISK!!!!!

My sister looked at me and said o little sis

It cant be that bad

She tapped the want 1,2,3

And disappeared rite in front of me!!!!!

And as the wand hit the ground

I realised she dint give me MY £5

To this day she has not come back

And for letting her do it I dint half get a smack

So I am telling you now, so you have been told

Especially when there’s money involved

Do not trust older sister

Cause they are all money snitchers

hi here is my poem STAR

twirling and twinkling in the sky

a big bright star catches my eye

i was tired, so tired so i said goodbye

when i looked back i started to cry

the star that i met was gone, had it flied?

that very night i took another look and i said hi

up in the dark so verry high

my little star had come back, OH MY!

HOPE YOU LIKED IT!

Awwh your both very good & writting poems keep it up =]

Take care x  

Hi! This is my poem -

NEVER ALONE

Sometimes it feels like you’re falling apart,

And sometimes everything goes right,

Some worries and problems are easy to beat,

And some keep you up all night.

Sometimes life can just get on top of you,

Sometimes you’re up there on top,

Sometimes you’re sailing straight through life,

And other times things make you stop.

Maybe you care for a sibling or parent,

Maybe you care for the two,

You’re never alone, there’s a load of us here,

And we’ll always be right here for you.

WOW gr8 poems!!! there fab!!! keep up the good work!!!

 heres some more of mine!!!

how to catch a haggis

a haggis is a cross between a fox and a hound
and if you ever go there
youll find its a traditonal meal in scotland.

if you ever catch one its not as easy as they say
ok your looking rather puzzled
just let me explaine.

 so you need to be in scotland
thats the only place youll find it
believe me to do this you need a lot of guts & wit
coz if you dont then half way through youll probably quit.

your now in scotland and down comes the snow
so the first thing you will need
is some warm boots and clothes.

now your fully clothed
this next bit aint fun
because your gonna need a knife
and a rather large gun.

 the gun you have probably guessed
is to shoot the poor thing,
but what joy to this experience,
is the knife going to bring?

well it wont bring you joy
itll probably bring you pain
but dont worrie its only once
you wont have to use it again.

your looking a bit worried at what this knife is all about
so chill, sit down and brace yourself
this will probably make you shout.

you have probably been told,
and believe me its not a lie,
the haggises leg are shorter
on its left leg side.

many wonder why this has to be,
well hes running round a moutian
(wich is hard to do, believe you,me)

so the reason for the leg thing thing is obviously
when hes running away from hunters
he can very easily flee.

now the knife comes in, sorry to break the news
but to catch the haggis, a leg youll have to loose.
now relax and please dont stress about it
just sit down and think about it.

this creatures legs are short, so he can run fast round the mountain.
then surely you only need half a leg,so you can run just as fast as he can

your now ready to chase itso you can have it for your tea,
ha that sounds interesting, this iv got to see,
all over the mountains youll chase it, including ben nevis,
but youl have to be alert because it hides in every crevis.

and if you catch it for supper
as you will soon find out
that if you pull its tail, its eyes will pop out!!

Here's another Young Carers one.

Us

Life’s so hard, being a young carer,

The emotional stress and the strain,

But it’s never just “me” and it’s never just “you”,

We won’t leave you stuck in the rain.

By “we” I mean other young carers,

Yes, there are more of us ‘round.

We’ll stop you from losing your footing,

And keep you right here on the ground.

Us is such a nice word to use,

We’re a family, a group, a team,

And once you’ve tried being a young carer,

You’ll know what those words really mean.

Wow, we're really impressed with all these!

Just thought we'd share another one with you, that somebody sent to us today: 

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Behind the Mist

Now some days your life seems a pile of gloom
When it’s dark and your heart is not singing its tune
When the flowers are black and the air is like lead
And you’d much rather spend the next two years in bed.

But something that you need to keep in your mind
Is the world can be cruel but can also be kind
And the mist that is there at the start of the day
By the heat of the sun can be soon put away.

So be like the sun as it shines every day
Even if there are dark clouds in the way
If you rise and you smile and you hold your head high
You will help both yourself and those others who cry.

you are all so talented here is my very bad attempt

puppet girl

puppet girl puppet girl,
your strings all in a twirl,
puppet girl puupet girl
you long to see the world

i know you feel alone
that the sky is so far away
that you're stuck forever this way
you have so much to do
so many depending on you

puppet girl puppet girl
we're here to help
puppet girl puppet girl
you can rest youre head

we'll cut your strings
well let you fly free
your a carer a child
sometimes you seem so mild

puppet girl puppet girl
we all know your pain
puppet girl puppet girl
your no longer alone