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Poetry, poems and all things poetic.........

Last post 07-02-2008, 1:18 PM by josh d. 6 replies.
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  •  26-09-2007, 9:23 AM

    Poetry, poems and all things poetic.........

    Hello folks, we got sent this poem written by a young carer and thought you might like to see it! 

    Let us know what you think of it and perhaps submit your own ........ at some stage we might have a Creative Writing page within the site where we could feature such things.

    From a young age taking on the caring responsibility,
    Helping someone else with their physical and mental abilities.
    Having to stay strong and deal with the strife,
    While other kids are enjoying their social life.
    You have to learn to grow up before you should,
    And a lot of the time you are rarely understood.
    Dealing with the outbursts knowing it’s not their fault,
    As you push your own problems away into your secret vault.
    Taking on the dominating role,
    Always there to help and console.
    Becoming excluded from others at school,
    Kids start slagging you off and start being cruel.
    Being a young carer becomes your occupation,
    A job without training or preparation.
    This responsibility is just pushed onto you,
    But it is something you know you have to do.
    It gives you the feeling you have done something good,
    But at the same time you’d take your independence back at any chance you
    could!
    By Sara

    Youngcarers.net Team

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  •  26-09-2007, 1:09 PM

    Re: Poetry, poems and all things poetic.........

    thats brilliant!! Tell her well done- and to join YC.NET!!!!!!!!!

     

  •  26-09-2007, 1:55 PM

    Re: Poetry, poems and all things poetic.........

    Omg thats awesome shes really good welldone sara sounds like it should
  •  12-10-2007, 4:22 PM

    Re: Poetry, poems and all things poetic.........

    omg that is amazing brilliant perfect  1_of_the_best every thing i can think of
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  •  14-11-2007, 8:08 AM

    Re: Poetry, poems and all things poetic.........

    Sara that is good! i write poetry too, it is just so fun, isn't it? saxaphonem8!!!!!!!!!!
  •  08-01-2008, 6:10 PM

    Re: Poetry, poems and all things poetic.........

    wow i love poems! and i think this ones fab!
  •  07-02-2008, 1:18 PM

    Re: Poetry, poems and all things poetic.........

    Wow brilliant poem neat I wish i was that good at poetry
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