i was thinking the discussion about poems inspired me so maby we could wright some of our own!!! heres some of mine

MUM

When mum got arthritis it was over a year ago

But to see her walk the pain she’s been thru would never know.

Lying there in her bed, she’s as cold as ice can be

She needs help walking to the loo, and she cannot make her own tea.

Its not funny when she screams in pain at 5oclock in the morning

She’s go the most dreadful cramp, and it comes without a warning.

Again she’s up and about, riding along on her scooter

Going places here and there, and wherever it dose suit her.

Then all of a sudden she’s got it again, the arthritis hits

And her energy it will quit.

So here we are again, were back to square one

The pain-free time it came, and now it seems to have gone

But hey think of that saying this two will pass

Coz for a while she will be out and about again and will be a happy lass

The magic set

Me and my sister are beat friends,

And we have a magic set

And at making ourselves appear and disappear

We rely are the best

We have a magic box and a magic wand that folds

We get the table, box ,and sofa all in a row

We hake sure there’s no holes for people to see then were ready to go

We have made a secret whole In the box where we can get out of it

And what’s cool is its at the back and no one knows about it

I tap the wand on the table 1,2,3

My sister then crawls out of the box

And hides behind the settee

One day my sister said to me

Little sister I do feel that if I give you £5

I can make my self disappear for real

£5!!!!! I said YOU HAVE A DEAL!!!!!!

You have probably guessed my sister is a child

Who is of cores extremely wild.

She grabbed the wand and clenched her fits

HALT!!!! I said IT’S A BIT OF A RISK!!!!!

My sister looked at me and said o little sis

It cant be that bad

She tapped the want 1,2,3

And disappeared rite in front of me!!!!!

And as the wand hit the ground

I realised she dint give me MY £5

To this day she has not come back

And for letting her do it I dint half get a smack

So I am telling you now, so you have been told

Especially when there’s money involved

Do not trust older sister

Cause they are all money snitchers